thanks, dustus! funny how many things end with a stumble in life… i also tried to help the reader “stumble” a little bit by putting a hiccup-py comma in the middle of the last line. wasn’t sure if that worked or not.
and mez, we’re so on the same page. it’s almost my favorite thing about each season: how it prepares me for the next. and winter DEFINITELY gets me ready for spring.
getting it 
this human spirit
would like to send a message:
winter, take a hike!
you’re clever, human!
but our tides of hope and age
obey the slow sun,
who frequently hides.
but soon the bashful months will
turn into summer.
(thanks again for the
comments, support, and reading!
see you again soon.)
thanks for dropping in today and your warm regards. lol…adams comment. hope the loss of steam precedes spring…
sure thing, brian. your blog is always a pleasure. and yeah… i’m hoping the same thing about the spring!
the ride of winter
over the human spirit
Precise …
thanks, dhyan! i’m feeling the need for more precision in my writing, in general, so it’s good to hear that.
Very nice. I like how it ends with a stumble. Thanks 🙂
feels very springy. in that case, ill let winter ride over my human spirit any day
thanks, dustus! funny how many things end with a stumble in life… i also tried to help the reader “stumble” a little bit by putting a hiccup-py comma in the middle of the last line. wasn’t sure if that worked or not.
and mez, we’re so on the same page. it’s almost my favorite thing about each season: how it prepares me for the next. and winter DEFINITELY gets me ready for spring.