the great feathered fire
alights beyond the water
smears a nest of soot.


6 thoughts on “dusk

  1. actually, i know this one is a haiku, the last one was a nice longer poem, and the one before that was another haiku if I’m not mistaken….they could actually go together. or perhaps i can see you sitting by the thai pool using the relaxation to let your mind rest. holla.

  2. i should blend them all up together… yeah, local circumstances have certainly influenced the recent pieces. do you think they’re too much alike?

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